Squiddy22

Garfieldo- About your edits on "Myths and Rumors" (PLEASE READ)

I noticed you've joined the wiki, and you've been doing a pretty good job so far, fixing typos and rephrasing some things, and adding information... But I was really upset about some of the changes made to my "Toontown Myths and Rumors" article. Most of them were fine, correcting a few things, but there were a several big mistakes you made. I know you're new, and I'm not trying to be mean, but you should really look over your work better. In case you're wondering, here are the mistakes I noticed:

• Claim: Saying Angry phrases to your doodle makes them sad.
• Status: Not always.

• Saying stuff like "You stink!" does effect your doodle's emotion, but most people say it makes them tired.

There was nothing wrong with "Not exactly". First off, I've never seen a doodle become sad from stinking it, and by saying "always" you're implying that it sometimes happens, when it doesn't. Also, you're saying that people use it to make them tired, and also saying it doesn't effect your doodle's emotions, while tired is an emotion. I changed it back since the version I had, had more information. If you had found anything wrong with the original version, please let me know. Lastly, there were some problems with spacing, but that's just a minor thing which I don't mind that much.

Anyway, I think the thing you need to watch out for to make your edits better, is to pay close attention to formatting. Formatting is the style in which the page is done. Some of changes you made were inconsistant with the rest of the page. Other than this, you're good.

Your message to me made me feel bad like I wasn't doing a good job. I've seen my doodle sad when I said something mean by accident. I want you to know that your message sort of hurt my feelings. Just wanted you to know that.

-squiddy22